Brittany

[macktruckturner]

C/C encouraged, as always.

Set #1 - Brittany's Got a Gun and I'm not even sure why.

Set #2 - Window Light

Set #3 - Mirror

 

[Tracker]

All the mirror shots and window light shots are A+ in my book except the hand focused shot. Seems like an odd place to try and draw your eye to. I would crop out her thumbs on the first window light as the hot pink nail polish tends to be a distraction to me.

On the mask shots, the 2nd one is my favorite because it draws attention to her eyes, which are beautiful. Morally, I'm not a big fan of using any gun as a casual prop, but that's just me. Technically, the bra straps are a negative for me, too. On the third mask shot, I would have tried to bring out her eyes with some reflected, focused light.

 

[macktruckturner]

Thanks for the input

 

[bhouston]

They look great Anthony!

 

[STrider]

what gun?

 

[jhansen]

yeah...there's a gun in those first pictures? Nice stuff Ant!

 

[Kilrymont]

That's one deeply luscious girlfriend you have there, sir. Not so easy to be completely objective in a crit environment when such beauty is the subject...

But since that's what is invited, perhaps the white clothing is just a bit too similar to the background in shots #4, 5, 6. And there's some highlight burn-out in her white top in the mirror shots.

Brittany's pose in shot #3 I'm not keen on. The crossed arms suggest a defensive barrier and coupled with the revolver, has a certain overtone of aggression that doesn't somehow gel with the rest of the set.

But to see a lovely girl who's thankfully not unhealthily stick-thin but a *real* woman, is very nice indeed.

You're to be congratulated for having the good taste to photograph her. (But I'm not sure about the gun in this context either)

 

[Sleepy Weasel]

Oh, I thought that was his sister.

 

[macktruckturner]

That's one deeply luscious girlfriend you have there, sir. Not so easy to be completely objective in a crit environment when such beauty is the subject...

But since that's what is invited, perhaps the white clothing is just a bit too similar to the background in shots #4, 5, 6. And there's some highlight burn-out in her white top in the mirror shots.

Brittany's pose in shot #3 I'm not keen on. The crossed arms suggest a defensive barrier and coupled with the revolver, has a certain overtone of aggression that doesn't somehow gel with the rest of the set.

But to see a lovely girl who's thankfully not unhealthily stick-thin but a *real* woman, is very nice indeed.

You're to be congratulated for having the good taste to photograph her. (But I'm not sure about the gun in this context either)

Thanks very much for the input!

Oh, I thought that was his sister.

Nope, neither a sister nor a girlfriend. Just a girl. A very attractive girl.

 

[M38A1]

I really like how Mirror shot #2 shot just pops at you. I know there's a mirror and it's a reflection, but I'm drawn pronto to the reflection and the rest just fades. Nice job.

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