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Model: Corey McLaughlan
Hats by Sharon Sullivan of Dreamhats.com
Wardrobe and Makeup by Corey McLauchlan of coreyana.com
I'm sort of digging the high-contrast work you're doing of late....
#1 I do think the hat blends a bit to easily with the background. There's no defined lines between the hat and background and her eye sort of gets lost in there too. I'd bet if the data is there, a slight increase in the shadow light specifically there, or a reduction of the blacks with a spot brush?
#2 has the same nit with the hat, but both eyes are there. Bueno. How did you get the wall to 'shiver' like you did? It's not a tilt-shift lens is it? Or did you liquify her a 'bit'?
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