Mary's story: critique my video

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I volunteered to help out a local charity call Christ Clinic, to help them make a video for their website and to be used at their fundraisers.
We were trying to tell a story of someone helped by their services.

Let me know what you think. I'll be showing it to them Monday, and we'll be showing it at their big fundraiser breakfast Friday.

Filmed on a Canon 5D (I think)
Edited in iMovie

[ame="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuWBuN80_dA"]Christ Clinic Rose Mary's Story - YouTube[/ame]

 

[Tracker]

Overall very good. The background music's a little loud, especially over the physician. Couple of minor shooting/framing issues, but no deal breakers. Since you're putting it on Youtube, I'd put a donation/more info/clear call to action clickable link at the end. You never know who might run across it and decide to give.

 

[poser]

Overall very good. The background music's a little loud, especially over the physician. Couple of minor shooting/framing issues, but no deal breakers. Since you're putting it on Youtube, I'd put a donation/more info/clear call to action clickable link at the end. You never know who might run across it and decide to give.

Good thoughts. I'll play with the audio levels, and I agree, I need to bring down the background or bump the interview.
And great idea on the donation link.