I agree with Janet.
The other shots are nice, but don't grab my attention. The assignment seems to be open to wide interpretation, but focused somewhat on "lines"
The hi-rise under construction, in my ignorant opinion, would be better if focused on the floor designations and excluding the crane. Maybe even a crazy diagonal angle on it? To me, the lens flare is a little distracting, too.
The other shots are nice, but don't grab my attention. The assignment seems to be open to wide interpretation, but focused somewhat on "lines"
The hi-rise under construction, in my ignorant opinion, would be better if focused on the floor designations and excluding the crane. Maybe even a crazy diagonal angle on it? To me, the lens flare is a little distracting, too.